Tuesday, October 26, 2021
descriptive writing
descriptive writing This week we did descriptive writing for writing the photo was a girl in a library in a hole and it was very very fun so hope you enjoy my writing
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Hi Vadium,
ReplyDeleteI love the desciptive writing you have done for the picture above, there's some very cool 'creepy' sentences. My challenge to you is to use different sentence starters on your next piece of descriptive writing. Remember to use some senses in your writing...see, hear, touch etc...how does he feel only eating cold food?
Great Job Vadium